Monday, May 5, 2025

"Ring-a-Ding Girl"

 

Maggie McNamara as Bunny Blake

“Ring-a-Ding Girl”
Season Five, Episode 133
Original Air Date:
December 27, 1963

 

Cast:
Barbara “Bunny” Blake: Maggie McNamara
Hildy Powell: Mary Munday
Bud Powell: David Macklin
Dr. Floyd: George Mitchell
Ben Braden: Bing Russell
Cici (Bunny’s assistant): Betty Lou Gerson
Mr. Gentry: Hank Patterson
Jim (police trooper): Vic Perrin
Pilot: Bill Hickman

 

Crew:
Writer: Earl Hamner, Jr.
Director: Alan Crosland, Jr.
Producer: William Froug
Director of Photography: George T. Clemens
Production Manager: Ralph W. Nelson
Art Direction: George W. Davis & Malcolm Brown
Film Editor: Richard Heermance, a.c.e.
Set Decoration: Henry Grace & Robert R. Benton
Assistant Director: Charles Bonniwell, Jr.
Casting: Patricia Rose
Music: stock
Sound: Franklin Milton & Joe Edmondson
Mr. Serling’s Wardrobe: Eagle Clothes
Filmed at MGM Studios


And Now, Mr. Serling:

“Next time we enlist the aid of a very talented scribe, Earl Hamner, Jr. He’s written a story called ‘Ring-a-Ding Girl,’ and in the milieu of fantasy this one is strictly a blue-ribbon entry. It stars Maggie McNamara, and it involves a movie actress, a publicity tour, a strange flight and airplane, and some occult occurrences designed to send shivers through you like a fast subway train. Next time out on The Twilight Zone, ‘Ring-a-Ding Girl.’” 

Rod Serling’s Opening Narration: 

“Introduction to Bunny Blake. Occupation: film actress. Residence: Hollywood, California, or anywhere in the world the cameras happen to be grinding. Bunny Blake is a public figure. What she wears, eats, thinks, says is news. But underneath the glamor, the makeup, the publicity, the build-up, the costuming, is a flesh-and-blood person, a beautiful girl, about to take a long and bizarre journey into The Twilight Zone.” 

Summary: 

          Film actress Bunny Blake is preparing to leave on an airplane flight when her assistant delivers a small package. Enclosed is a gift from the Bunny Blake fan club based in her hometown of Howardville. The gift is a ring set with a large, dark stone. Bunny informs her assistant that they will pass directly over Howardville during their flight. Bunny places the ring on her finger to admire it when she suddenly sees a swirling mist appear in the dark stone. The mist parts to reveal the face of Bunny’s sister, Hildy, who implores Bunny to come home. The image fades away.

          Sometime later, Bunny arrives at her sister’s house, surprising Hildy and Hildy’s teenaged son Bud. Bunny tells Hildy that the ring made her feel like coming home. Bunny asks Hildy if everything is all right. Hildy reassures her and Bunny fears the image in the ring was a hallucination. Hildy informs Bunny that the whole town chipped in to buy her the ring, just as they had to send Bunny to Hollywood at the beginning of her acting career.

          Bunny can only stay in town for one day and Hildy informs her that she picked the perfect day, since it is the day of the Founder’s Day Picnic. Everyone in town will be in attendance. Bunny looks again at the stone on the ring. She again sees the swirling mist, which dissipates to reveal the face of Ben Braden, a local television personality and love interest from Bunny’s past. Ben implores Bunny to come home, that the town needs her, before fading away. 

          The unnerving experience causes Bunny to faint. Dr. Floyd, an old family physician, arrives to check on Bunny. Dr. Floyd tells her that she is overtired and needs rest. Bunny knows that Dr. Floyd is involved in the Founder’s Day Picnic, and she asks him to postpone the event for a day. When Dr. Floyd scoffs at this, Bunny tells him that she has only one day in town and wants to visit friends. Dr. Floyd tells her that she cannot expect the town to divert its plans based on her whim. When Bunny insists it is not a whim, Dr. Floyd says that this may work in Hollywood but not in Howardville.

          Again, Bunny is compelled to gaze into the stone on the ring. Revealed within the swirling mist is the hard countenance of Cyrus Gentry, who tells Bunny that she is nothing special but that she could be special if she helped the town. Bunny again feels faint and rushes upstairs, leaving Dr. Floyd and Hildy perplexed. Dr. Floyd gives Hildy a prescription for Bunny and departs.

          Bunny returns downstairs and claims nothing is wrong. She wants to go out and see her old friends. Bunny enlists Bud as a companion. They leave in Bud’s convertible roadster as a gathering thunderstorm ominously rumbles overhead. Bunny asks Bud to take her to the high school so she can see Mr. Gentry.

          Bunny implores Mr. Gentry to keep the doors to the school auditorium unlocked that afternoon. Gentry reminds Bunny that the doors remain unlocked. Bunny thanks him and tells him not to go to the Founder’s Day Picnic. 

          As thunder rumbles overhead, Bunny walks over to the local television station. Back at Hildy’s house, a phone call from a friend tells Hildy to turn on her television. Hildy is shocked to see Bunny on the local network talking to Ben Braden. Bunny informs viewers that she will be putting on a one-woman show in the high school auditorium and wishes for all the town to be there. When Ben points out the conflict with the Founder’s Day Picnic, Bunny tells viewers that they have a choice of coming to see her or getting bitten by ants at the picnic.

          Hildy is appalled that Bunny would place such a choice before the townspeople. She receives phone calls from people who do not know what to do. Hildy scolds Bunny when Bunny returns to the house, telling her that she comes off as a show-off and a Hollywood big shot. Hildy also informs Bunny that she and Bud are going to the Founder’s Day Picnic. When she sees how distressed Bunny is, however, Hildy relents and tells Bunny that they will go to her show.

          Bunny gazes into the stone on the ring. She sees an airplane in the sky. She sees herself and her assistant on board the airplane. The assistant sneers at the “flyspeck” town of Howardville and tells Bunny she should not go back there.

          Later, as Bunny, Hildy, and Bud are preparing to go to the high school for Bunny’s show, the storm finally breaks overhead, releasing a deluge of rain. Bunny looks again into the stone on the ring and sees an airplane captain informing passengers that the severe weather will make the flight very rough. Bunny again sees herself and her assistant on board the airplane. Bunny’s assistant asks Bunny if she is scared. Bunny tells her yes, isn’t everyone? 

          Hildy and Bud rush to the front window when they hear sirens outside. They see the flashing lights of emergency responders. Bunny, standing near the front door, quietly says goodbye. Bunny walks outside into the rain as the telephone rings. Bunny slowly fades away.

          The phone call is from a police trooper at the scene of an airplane crash in town. The plane crashed into the picnic grounds. The trooper informs Hildy that Bunny was a passenger on the plane and died in the crash. Hildy cannot believe it. Bunny has been with her all afternoon. The trooper insists that Bunny is dead. He has seen the body. Hildy turns around to find Bunny gone. She calls out desperately but cannot find her sister anywhere inside or outside the house.

          The radio reports on the airplane crash. A greater tragedy was averted by the fact that most townspeople were not at the picnic grounds but rather at the high school, waiting for Bunny’s show. Many lives were saved because of this. Hildy finds Bunny’s ring on the carpet. It is battered and broken. 

Rod’s Serling’s Closing Narration:

“We are all travelers. The trip starts in a place called Birth and ends in that lonely town called Death. And that’s the end of the journey. Unless you happen to exist for a few hours like Bunny Blake in the misty regions of The Twilight Zone.”  

Commentary: 

          Filmed on the same recognizable living room set as “Living Doll” and “Ninety Years Without Slumbering,” “Ring-a-Ding Girl” is the subtle tale of a preternatural phenomenon known as “bilocation,” the condition of being in two places simultaneously. Although the study of this alleged ability is today the province of spiritualists, it is also believed to have been a miracle performed by Christian holy figures.

          Earl Hamner, Jr. is less interested in the duality of Bunny Blake’s existence, however, choosing instead to focus on Bunny’s relationships with the people in her hometown, and on Bunny’s sacrifice to save those people. In this way, the episode is more aligned with a type of supernatural fiction, the tale of the portent or premonition of death. The Guide to Supernatural Fiction lists several examples of this type of story, under such headings as “Premonitions,” “Portents of Death,” and “Visions of Person to Die,” dating to the eighteenth century. Richard Matheson’s later fifth season episode, “Spur of the Moment,” though not dealing directly with death, is in this vein, as is Rod Serling’s first season episode, “The Purple Testament.” The episode “Ring-a-Ding Girl” most resembles, however, is Rod Serling’s “Twenty-Two,” an episode based on a ghostly anecdote and centered around a premonition and an airplane crash.  

          “Ring-a-Ding Girl” may also remind viewers of previous episodes dealing with doubles or dual existence in small towns, such as Rod Serling’s “Walking Distance” or Charles Beaumont’s “In His Image.” Hamner’s lessened focus on the duality of Bunny’s existence, however, may result in the episode playing too subtly or even mildly confusing to some viewers. Bunny is not convincingly shown to be in both places at the same time, nor is her passage to Howardville shown. Unlike the journeys of Martin Sloan in “Walking Distance” or Alan Talbot in “In His Image,” Bunny simply appears in Howardville. The episode also suffers from the pacing and atmosphere of a television sitcom. The otherworldly atmosphere achieved in the aforementioned episodes is not evident in “Ring-a-Ding Girl.”

The viewer may not understand that Bunny is concurrently traveling aboard an airplane during her time in Howardville. She is seen on the airplane in the misty depths of her ring, which has only displayed hallucinatory visions of the townspeople. Bunny is, however, solidly in Howardville, conversing with several people and appearing on local television. In some ways, the episode plays like a ghost story without a ghost. Besides a fainting spell, there is little indication that Bunny’s existence in Howardville is in any way preternatural.

          This ambiguity is finally dispelled at the end of the episode when Bunny fades away as news of her death in the airplane crash is relayed to Hildy. Yet, there is the ambiguous final sequence when Hildy finds Bunny’s battered ring on the living room carpet. The ring is presumably broken because it was on Bunny’s finger during the airplane crash. Why, then, does the ring remain in Hildy’s living room? The notion of how Bunny knew what tragedy to prevent and where this tragedy would occur is also left unexplained.

          At some point, Bunny became aware that the airplane on which she traveled was going to crash into the picnic grounds of her hometown, killing the townspeople attending the Founder’s Day Picnic. This premonition was presumably interpreted by Bunny from visions of the townspeople seen in her ring. During the flight, she willed herself to Howardville in an act of bilocation to stage an event that drew people away from the picnic grounds. This accomplished, Bunny faded from existence in Howardville as she died in the airplane crash. Tony Albarella, in his commentary on the episode in The Twilight Scripts of Earl Hamner, described the ending as a “satisfying, offbeat conclusion,” that was also “somewhat subtler than the usual Twilight Zone ‘twist’ ending.”

This ambiguity does not detract from the viewer’s enjoyment of the episode, but it does display the challenges of dramatizing a story in which the nature of the supernatural element is hidden in service of a twist ending. This is perhaps why The Twilight Zone Companion dismissed the episode as “much like the stone in the ring Bunny Blake receives: interesting, but no gem.”

The original title of Earl Hamner’s script was “There Goes Bunny Blake,” but this was likely deemed too light in tone for the inherent tragedy of the episode. The script was first retitled “The Return of Hildy Blake” and then “The Return of Bunny Blake,” which was the episode’s working title throughout production. The title was changed to “Ring-a-Ding Girl” in post-production, inspired by two songs performed by Frank Sinatra, “I Won’t Dance,” a jazz standard recorded by Sinatra in 1957, which includes the lyric “Ring-a-ding-ding, you’re lovely,” and “Ring-a-Ding-Ding,” the title track on Sinatra’s 1961 album. 

Charles Beaumont with Otto Preminger
from Rod Serling's The Twilight Zone Magazine
June, 1989

The title change was perhaps prompted by a similarity to the contemporary novel Bunny Lake is Missing (1957), written by Merriam Modell under the pseudonym Evelyn Piper. The novel was adapted into a film by director Otto Preminger in 1965. One of several notable writers hired by Preminger to adapt the novel to the screen was Charles Beaumont, who completed a script in 1959 that was ultimately unused. Incidentally, Preminger gave Maggie McNamara her first notable screen role in The Moon is Blue (1953), a film adaptation of a stage production McNamara previously performed in for eighteen months. McNamara’s performance in the film earned an Academy Award nomination, despite the controversy surrounding the film due to its open depiction of sexual relations. 

          Maggie McNamara (1928-1978) was born in New York City. Her desire to be a fashion designer led to a career in modelling while still a teenager. She was successful in this regard, being twice featured on the cover of LIFE magazine. The latter appearance reportedly led to David O. Selznick offering McNamara a film contract, which the young model turned down. McNamara soon began studying drama, however, and was on the New York stage by the age of twenty-three. She made an early television appearance on the suspense anthology series The Clock in 1950. Film work followed but was sporadic. By most accounts, McNamara was ill-suited for the public life of a film actress, living away from Hollywood and pushing back against the publicity demands of studios. Outside of The Moon is Blue, an appearance in Three Coins in the Fountain (1954) and a role in Preminger’s The Cardinal (1963) are the highlights of her film career. A year after her appearance on The Twilight Zone, McNamara appeared in the second season episode of The Alfred Hitchcock Hour, “The Body in the Barn.” Her career declined sharply afterwards. By the late 1970s she was working as a typist and in her spare time writing a screenplay she hoped would be produced. Long suffering from depression, McNamara took her own life in 1978 with an intentional overdose of barbiturates. She was 49 years old. It was a sad end for a lovely and vibrant actress, and one which suggests disturbing parallels with the fate of Bunny Blake, as well as with the death of fellow Twilight Zone actress Inger Stevens, star of “The Hitch-Hiker,” an episode thematically related to “Ring-a-Ding Girl.”   

          Supporting McNamara in the episode is Mary Munday as Bunny’s sister Hildy. Munday (1926-1997) was born in Los Angeles. She landed small roles in B pictures before beginning a busy television career, mostly in crime dramas and westerns. She appeared on Science Fiction Theatre and in the “The Kiss-Off,” an episode of the sixth season of Alfred Hitchcock Presents. Munday also had a supporting role in the underrated psychological thriller Magic (1978), alongside Anthony Hopkins and Burgess Meredith. 

          David Macklin (1941-2017), playing Bud in the episode, did not have fond memories of his time on the set. In an interview with Martin Grams, Jr., Macklin described his dislike of the script, the incompetence of the makeup department, and the apathetic treatment of the performers by director Alan Crosland, Jr. Macklin did enjoy working with McNamara and Munday, however, and admitted that he received more fan mail for The Twilight Zone than for anything else in his career. 

          George Mitchell (1905-1972), playing Dr. Floyd, is likely a familiar face to regular viewers of the series. He appeared in three additional episodes, perhaps most memorably as the grumpy gas station owner who refuses service to Nan Adams (Inger Stevens) in “The Hitch-Hiker.” Mitchell also appeared in “Execution” and in Earl Hamner’s finest episode for the series, “Jess-Belle.” A prolific performer in many western programs, Mitchell also appeared on Lights Out, Suspense, Inner Sanctum, One Step Beyond, Thriller, Alfred Hitchcock Presents, and The Alfred Hitchcock Hour. 

          Betty Lou Gerson (1914-1999), playing Bunny’s assistant, is remembered as the voice of Cruella de Vil in the 1961 Disney animated film One Hundred and One Dalmatians. Gerson also provided narration for Disney’s Cinderella (1950) and had a small role in The Fly (1958) opposite Vincent Price.

          Rounding out the cast are several familiar faces. Prolific character actor Hank Patterson (1888-1975), here playing the gruff Mr. Gentry, previously appeared on the series in “Kick the Can,” and appeared later in the fifth season in “Come Wander with Me.” Patterson had numerous small roles in B films and television westerns, including an episode of Rod Serling’s The Loner. Bing Russell (1926-2003), father of Kurt, who previously appeared on the series in “The Arrival,” portrays Ben Braden. Vic Perrin (1916-1989) appears briefly in the role of Jimmy, the police trooper. Perrin previously appeared on the series in “People Are Alike All Over.” A prolific television and voice actor, Perrin is remembered by science fiction viewers for providing the Control Voice on The Outer Limits. Notable stunt driver Bill Hickman (1921-1986) (Bullitt, The French Connection) appears in an uncredited role as the airplane pilot.

          Although the episode is marred by ambiguity and uninspired direction, a moving performance by Maggie McNamara and an engaging script by Earl Hamner, Jr. lift the episode above the lower points of the uneven fifth season. 

Grade: C 

Next Time in the Vortex: We look at “You Drive,” another offering from writer Earl Hamner, Jr. Thanks for reading!

 

Acknowledgements: 
Maggie McNamara on
the cover of LIFE
March 29, 1948
(via Ebay)
 


--The Twilight Zone Scripts of Earl Hamner by Earl Hamner and Tony Albarella (Cumberland House, 2003)
 
--The Twilight Zone: Unlocking the Door to a Television Classic by Martin Grams, Jr. (OTR, 2008)
 
--A Critical History of Television’s The Twilight Zone, 1959-1964 by Don Presnell and Marty McGee (McFarland & Co., 1998)
 
--The Twilight Zone Companion (3rd ed.) by Marc Scott Zicree (Silman-James, 2018)
 
--The Guide to Supernatural Fiction by E.F. Bleiler (Kent State University Press, 1983)
 
--The Work of Charles Beaumont: An Annotated Bibliography and Guide by William F. Nolan (Borgo Press, 1986)
 
--Review of Blu-ray edition of Bunny Lake is Missing by Glenn Erickson (DVD Talk, November 24, 2014)
 
--The Internet Movie Database (imdb.com)

 

Notes: 
 
--Earl Hamner, Jr. scripted eight episodes of the series, five of which were broadcast during the fifth and final season.
 
--Alan Crosland, Jr. directed three previous episodes of the series: “The Parallel,” “The Old Man in the Cave,” and “The 7th Is Made Up of Phantoms.”
 
--George Mitchell appeared in three additional episodes of the series: “The Hitch-Hiker,” “Execution,” and “Jess-Belle.”


--Hank Patterson also appeared in the third season episode, "Kick the Can," and the later fifth season episode, "Come Wander With Me." 
 
--Bing Russell previously appeared on the series in “The Arrival.”
 
-Vic Perrin previously appeared on the series in “People Are Alike All Over.”
 
-JP

Wednesday, March 5, 2025

"Ninety Years Without Slumbering"

Sam Forstmann (Ed Wynn) with his
grandfather clock

Ninety Years Without Slumbering"

Season Five, Episode 132

Original Airdate: December 20, 1963

 

Cast:

Sam Forstmann: Ed Wynn

Marnie Kirk: Carolyn Kearney

Doug Kirk: James Callahan

Dr. Mel Avery: William Sargent

Carol Byron: Carol Chase

Policeman: John Picard

Mover #1: Dick Wilson

Mover #2: Chuck Hicks

 

Crew:

Writer: Teleplay by Richard De Roy, story by George Clayton Johnson (credited to Johnson Smith)

Director: Roger Kay

Producer: William Froug

Director of Photography: Robert Pittack, a.s.c.

Production Manager: Ralph W. Nelson

Art Direction: George W. Davis and Malcolm Brown

Film Editor: Richard Heermance, a.c.e.

Set Decoration: Henry Grace and Robert R. Benton

Assistant Director: Charles Bonniwell, Jr.

Casting: Patricia Rose

Music: Bernard Herrmann

Sound: Franklin Milton and Joe Edmondson

Mr. Serling’s Wardrobe: Eagle Clothes

Filmed at MGM Studios.

 

And Now, Mr. Serling:

“Next time a new author joins the ranks of the elves and gremlins who supply the imaginative material on The Twilight Zone. His name is Richard De Roy and his story is in the best tradition of the program. It stars one of the gentlest and certainly the most able of America’s actors. A beloved little figure on the American scene named Ed Wynn. Next time on The Twilight Zone, Ed Wynn stars in ‘Ninety Years Without Slumbering.’”


Rod Serling’s Opening Narration:

“Each man measures his time. Some with hope, some with joy, some with fear. But Sam Forstmann measures his allotted time by a grandfather clock, a unique mechanism whose pendulum swings between life and death, a very special clock that keeps a special kind of time…in the Twilight Zone.”

 

Summary:

Sam Forstmann, a former clockmaker, owns a grandfather clock that has been in his possession since the day he was born. He cleans and maintains it constantly. He lives with his granddaughter, Marnie, who is heavily pregnant, and her husband, Doug. Forstmann’s family is worried about his preoccupation with the clock as he spends the majority of his time working on it. They suggest he visit a psychiatrist.

At the psychiatrist’s office, Forstmann, who doesn’t trust “headshrinkers,” keeps deliberately trying to change the subject. He eventually reveals that he believes that if the clock stops ticking, he will die. The doctor tells him that he should get rid of the clock.

Back at the house, Forstmann hires movers to move the clock from his room on the second floor to the living room on the first floor to appease his family. Once the clock is situated, Forstmann believes he sees it stop ticking and he faints. After regaining consciousness moments later, he finds that the clock is still ticking the way it should be. When Marnie and Doug return home later, they remind him that the psychiatrist, a friend of Doug’s, says that Forstmann should get rid of the clock.

The next day, Forstmann gives the clock to Marnie’s neighbor, Carol, who promises to allow him to come and see it as much as he wants. A few days later, Carol and her husband go out of town for the weekend without telling him. The clock will wind down before they return. Panicked, Forstmann tries to break into their home to wind the clock but is apprehended by the police before he can do so.

Back in his bed later that night, Forstmann sees a vision of his spirit who tells him that his time has come and that the clock has finally stopped ticking forever. Forstmann tells his spirit that he is not ready to die and that he no longer believes his fate is tied to the clock. He wants to live to see his grandson grow up. The spirit vanishes. Marnie enters his room to check on him. Forstmann tells her that the clock has stopped ticking and that he feels just fine. From now on he is going to focus on more important things. He takes her gently by the arm and walks her to the kitchen to fix her a snack.

 

Rod Serling’s Closing Narration:

“Clocks are made by men. God creates time. No man can prolong his allotted hours, he can only live them to the fullest, in this world, or in the Twilight Zone.”


Commentary:

“Ninety Years Without Slumbering” would see The Twilight Zone bid a less than harmonious farewell to one of its most talented and specific voices, writer George Clayton Johnson. Johnson saw eight of his stories appear on the show, four written by himself and four adapted by others. This makes him the fifth most prolific writer for the show after Serling, Beaumont, Matheson and Earl Hamner, Jr. While his output might have been less than that of his peers, the quality of his storytelling made his contributions to the show invaluable. Among his credited episodes of the show are acclaimed favorites “A Game of Pool” “Nothing in the Dark” and “Kick the Can,” the last of which was remade into a segment of Twilight Zone: The Movie (1983) directed by Steven Spielberg. Johnson’s work had been appearing on the show since the first season when Serling adapted his story “Execution.” Although he had encountered grievances with the show before such as not receiving screen credit when “The Prime Mover” was first broadcast, Serling rewriting the ending to “A Game of Pool,” and producer Buck Houghton buying his story “Sea Change” and then having to sell it back to him when they weren’t able to produce it, Johnson had mostly maintained a good relationship with the show due likely to his close friendship with Beaumont and Matheson. However, when William Froug took over as producer during the show’s fifth season he attempted to take the show in a different direction and canned a handful of scripts already slated for production, including a script written by Johnson and William F. Nolan called “Dream Flight” that the show's original producer Buck Houghton bought before he left. Froug also hired Richard De Roy to rewrite another script Johnson had sold to previous producer Bert Granet originally called “The Grandfather Clock” and later retitled “Tick of Time.” After seeing the numerous changes to his script, now titled “Ninety Years Without Slumbering,” Johnson took his name off of it. And with that, George Clayton Johnson’s involvement with the show ended. In the ensuing decades, Johnson would give numerous interviews and write many articles discussing his work on the show and how proud he was of it. However, his dissatisfaction with “Ninety Years Without Slumbering” remained a negative topic for him for the rest of his life.

William Froug has received his share of criticism over the years for his handling of The Twilight Zone’s final days. But in fairness, Froug inherited a series, midseason, that had been on the air for nearly five years, had already been canceled once, and was declining creatively. He also saw its two most prolific writers suffering from severe fatigue, one of which, Charles Beaumont, with an illness that would later claim his life. So it makes sense that Froug would want to take the show in a different direction with new writers and directors in an attempt to revitalize it. Froug was a talented producer and screenwriter and is remembered by many who worked with him as being a kind and easy going person to be around. Before becoming a producer on The Twilight Zone, he had worked on over a dozen television series either as a producer or a writer or both. After The Twilight Zone ended he went on to produce a handful of successful series including Bewitched and Gilligan’s Island. He also sold scripts to numerous television series including Quincy, M.E., Big Hawaii, and Charlie’s Angels. Froug knew the medium very well but he, and the writers that he brought on board in the second half of the fifth season, seemed to be at odds with what worked on The Twilight Zone, a show with a very specific energy and viewpoint, one that is not easily definable. 

It’s not known exactly why Froug, and likely Serling also, chose to rewrite Johnson’s script or why they chose an outsider to do so. It’s possible that they wanted a more uplifting ending as opposed to the very upsetting one in Johnson’s script, although the complete pendulum swing in the other direction has been met with criticism over the years. The original script starts in much the same way as the one that ended up being broadcast. There is a married couple expecting a baby—named Connie and Foster in this version—and there is Connie’s grandfather, who is obsessed with his grandfather clock. It belonged to his grandfather and was given to him the day he was born. The room he lives in will soon become the nursery when the baby is born, so Grandfather is moving to the den. To consolidate space, he agrees to sell all his furniture except for the clock. Foster tries to persuade him to sell it as well as there is no room for it. Connie argues that her grandfather should be able to keep it. Grandfather tells them that he can't sell it. If the clock stops ticking, he will die. After an impassioned argument, Grandfather gives in and agrees to sell it to an antique dealer. At this exact moment Connie goes into labor. Foster reluctantly leaves the old man and takes her to the hospital. Grandfather calls an antique dealer and has the clock picked up. Later, as the movers deliver the clock to the antique shop, they almost drop it causing the pendulum to nearly stop ticking. Grandfather feels it instantly. A pain in his chest. He regrets selling the clock and begins walking to the antique shop at once. He is overwhelmed by the sights and sounds of heavy afternoon traffic, panting as he races to the shop. He finally makes it there and buys the clock back, realizing that he does not have a way to transport it back to his house. He bribes a kid with a small wagon to let him use it to move the huge clock. They stand it upright inside the wagon so it does not stop ticking. They maneuver it along the sidewalk, the old man looking tired and winded. Eventually they need to cross the street but cannot get the wagon across. Foster leaves the hospital to check on Grandfather and finds him in the middle of a crosswalk about to be run over, looking frail and out of breath. The clock loses its balance inside the small wagon and tips over into the street, glass and wood shattering. Grandfather collapses to the ground and dies in Foster’s arms. At that moment, his grandchild is born. The script ends in the nursery as the camera pans across the baby and to the newly refurbished grandfather clock.

Johnson’s original script differs drastically from De Roy’s. Johnson’s script focuses on the relationship between the old man and Foster rather than the old man and Connie. The second act is completely different, with the old man dying and his grandchild being born at the end of it. This changes not just the plot of the story but the theme of it as well. Johnson’s story seems to focus on the circle of life, the idea that everyone eventually gets old and new generations take their place. De Roy’s script is much more optimistic with an emphasis on not letting obsession and fear rule your life. According to The Twilight Zone Companion author Marc Scott Zicree, Johnson’s main frustration with the episode that eventually aired is Forstmann’s complete and abrupt surrender of a belief system that he has spent his entire life obsessing over. While De Roy’s happy ending is a bit absurd and it panders to the audience, it doesn’t completely ruin the story. You still care about the characters and the storytelling gives the episode a high rewatch value.

Both scripts also deal with addiction, something Serling had touched on several times in episodes like "The Fever" ""The Sixteen-Millimeter Shrine" and "Mister Denton on Doomsday." It is apparent in both stories that Forstmann likely suffers from anxiety and possibly other mental health issues as well. This is only made worse by the fact that he has been conditioned to believe that he must keep the clock working at all times, something which has manifested into an obsession causing him to dedicate his entire life to it by becoming a professional clockmaker. Again, this makes fair Johnson's frustration with De Roy's ending, but as it is only a thirty minute story, the viewer does not leave feeling overtly cheated.

The only thing that keeps this episode, which is very good, from being truly great is the bedroom scene where Forstmann sees a vision of himself and the fact that this single event appears to be the reason for his sudden new outlook on life. It is poorly written and is absurdly silly in an otherwise serious episode. It also comes very late the episode, and its drastically different tone derails the rest of the story.

Aging is a theme that runs throughout The Twilight Zone’s five seasons. Every regular writer for the show contributed at least a script or two that dealt sensitively with the acceptance of getting older. “The Trade-Ins,” “The Sixteen-Millimeter Shrine,” “Static,” “The Trouble with Templeton,” and “Passage on the Lady Anne” are just a few examples of an empathy for the elderly from writers who were mostly in their 30s at the time. But it seemed to be a theme that George Clayton Johnson had a sensitivity to specifically as three of his eight episodes—"Kick the Can,” “Nothing in the Dark,” and “Ninety Years”—dealt directly with old age and dying.

This is Richard De Roy’s only script for the show, despite being mentioned by name in Serling's promo spot for this episode. He got his start in television the way most writers of the time did, submitting scripts to live anthology dramas. He won a Writers Guild Award for his Alcoa Premiere episode “Jeeney Ray.” He would later go on to be a writer and producer for the popular prime-time soap opera, Peyton Place. He also wrote scripts for sitcoms like The Flying Nun and The Partridge Family. Later in his career he became a writer and producer for the 1980s detective series, Remington Steele. One of his only forays into feature films was his 1973 screenplay for the Robert Wise film, Two People, which starred Peter Fonda. In an interview with Stephen W. Bowie, De Roy says that he also tried to sell Froug an original script for The Twilight Zone about a patient in a mental hospital with amnesia, but Froug passed on it.

All three working titles for this episode— “The Grandfather Clock,” “Tick of Time,” and “Ninety Years Without Slumbering”—are references to the 1876 song “Grandfather’s Clock” written by Henry Clay Work. The song became a popular folk standard among pop and country artists in the early twentieth century. Johnny Cash recorded a popular version of it in 1959. The song is said to be where the term “grandfather clock” originated. The song is sung from the viewpoint of a grandson about his grandfather’s longcase clock. The clock was purchased the day his grandfather was born and has kept a record of his grandfather’s life. At the end of the song the clock stops ticking and his grandfather dies. Johnson modeled the premise of his script to adhere to the song, while De Roy’s script obviously changes the ending. Johnson’s final title of “Tick of Time” was likely scrapped due to the fact that the show already had an episode called “Nick of Time” which aired during its second season.

This is Bernard Hermann’s final original score for the show. Hermann contributed a total of seven original scores to the series. He also composed the original opening theme that was used in the show’s first season before being replaced by the familiar intro by Marius Constant at the beginning of the second season. Hermann is, of course, a giant of American cinema and a list of his credits is far too lengthy to mention here. This final score, which consists of woodwinds playing soft and somber renditions of Work’s song, might be his best work for the show, and it’s a fine send-off from such a talented artist. It is, I think, my favorite piece of music in the entire series.

This is director Roger Kay’s only episode of The Twilight Zone. Kay worked mostly in episodic television starting at the dawn of the medium in the early 1950s into the early 1970s. Aside from this episode of The Twilight Zone, Kay is best remembered for directing the 1962 film The Cabinet of Caligari which was written by Robert Bloch. Although the film is credited as a remake of the much more famous German film, The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari (1920), and was marketed as such, the two films share few similarities. There is also debate over how much of the finished script was written by Bloch as Bloch and Kay had a falling out during the writing process and Bloch abruptly quit. Regardless, neither was happy with the version of the film that was eventually released. Kay’s direction in “Ninety Years Without Slumbering” is not flashy but is still very good. Each scene is crafted specifically to put the emotional state of the characters on full display, which he does very well.

Ed Wynn is one of the most recognizable faces to appear on the show and a list of his credits is also too extensive to mention here. He had already enjoyed a decades long career as an actor and comedian and was a universally known performer when he appeared in the second episode of the show’s first season, “One for the Angels” in 1959. Wynn and Serling had, of course, worked together before that in Serling’s groundbreaking Playhouse 90 drama “Requiem for a Heavyweight” in 1956. This experience not only catapulted Serling into stardom as a writer but it also gave audiences a glimpse into Wynn’s talents as a dramatic actor, something the vaudevillian performer was initially very nervous about. The director of "Requiem for a Heavyweight," Ralph Nelson, later co-wrote and directed an episode of The Westinghouse Desilu Playhouse in 1960 called “The Man in the Funny Suit” about Wynn’s experience making Serling’s famed boxing drama. In it, the entire cast, including Serling, play fictional versions of themselves.

The success of "Requiem" is likely why Houghton and Froug sought Wynn for dramatic roles on The Twilight Zone and not comedic ones. It may be entirely coincidental that the themes of Wynn’s two episodes are so similar but he is still convincing in both of them. Both stories are about confronting one’s own mortality and both feature protagonists who want desperately to stay alive in their old age. In “One for the Angels” Lew Bookman, at first determined to defy death, eventually sacrifices his life in order to save the life of someone he cares about. Sam Forstmann learns to let go of his fear of dying and just live life. Both men learn to accept death as an inevitable part of life, a theme Johnson had explored before in “Nothing in the Dark.”

Carolyn Kearney makes her only appearance on The Twilight Zone here although she had a small role in the Westinghouse Desilu Playhouse production of Rod Serling’s “The Time Element” in 1958 which was the unofficial pilot of The Twilight Zone that Serling used to get the show greenlit. Kearney enjoyed a modest career in television throughout the 1950s and 60s as well as roles in a handful of independent films.

The rest of the supporting cast may be familiar to some viewers. James Callahan enjoyed a successful career as a working television actor. Today he is best remembered for his role as the family patriarch in Charles in Charge. This was his only appearance on The Twilight Zone. Carol Byron also makes her only appearance on the show in this episode. She acted steadily throughout the 1950s and 60s and then appears to have retired. William Sargent was also active in the early days of episodic television. Genre fans will know him from episodes of The Alfred Hitchcock Hour, Star Trek, and Mission: Impossible. Sargent also appeared in the season four episode “The Parallel.” John Pickard was an amazingly prolific bit player throughout his five decade career, appearing in pretty much every western series imaginable. After trying to make it in the NFL, Chuck Hicks became a legendary stuntman and stunt coordinator for film and television. During his lengthy career, he choreographed stunts for hundreds of films and television shows including Cool Hand Luke (1967), Stark Trek II & III, (1982, 1984) and Dirty Harry (1971). He would also occasionally snag acting roles, most notably in Dick Tracy (1990), The Enforcer (1976), and Shock Corridor (1963). The most recognizable face here is probably that of Dick Wilson. After a decades-long career as a working television actor, Wilson became the face of Charmin, appearing as Mr. Whipple in hundreds of commercials, spanning twenty-five years.

The Twilight Zone was an important part of George Clayton Johnson's career as a writer and it is the thing for which he is best remembered. His contributions helped to shape the tone of the show while the show, and the close-knit community of writers it fostered, helped him find a voice as a writer and build connections in the industry. Outside of The Twilight Zone, George Clayton Johnson wrote the original screenplay for the 1960 version of Ocean’s 11, the first episode of Star Trek, co-wrote the 1967 novel Logan’s Run with William F. Nolan, and also wrote or co-wrote episodes of Alfred Hitchcock Presents, Wanted: Dead or Alive, Route 66, Kung Fu, and Honey West. He also published numerous short stories during this time, many of which are collected in All of Us are Dying and Other Stories (Subterranean Press, 1999). He also wrote comics and had a hand, along with Ray Bradbury, in creating the first San Diego Comic Con in 1970. In the 1960s he formed a screenwriting company with Theodore Sturgeon, Richard Matheson, and Jerry Sohl called The Green Hand. Their goal was to pitch quality speculative fiction programs to networks in which they would be in control. They were hired by MGM and given an office on the MGM lot. Johnson served as president. After several years of pitching series ideas with no luck, they dissolved the company. One of the programs they pitched was a Twilight Zone-like anthology series called A Touch of the Strange.

While it is disappointing that Johnson's final interaction with the show was a negative experience, his voice can still be felt in the story and the end result is still a good episode. The characters, even the supporting roles, are filled with a unique empathy and concern for Sam Forstmann, and Ed Wynn's dramatic skills have never been better. Great direction from Kay and Hermann's deeply moving score help to make this one of the highlights of the fifth season.

Grade: B

Next up in the Vortex, we take a look at the glamorous life of Bunny Blake in Earl Hamner, Jr.'s "Ring-a-Ding Girl." See you then!

Grateful acknowledgement to the following:

The Twilight Zone: Unlocking the Door to a Television Classic by Martin Grams, Jr. (OTR, 2008)

The Twilight Zone Companion (3rd ed.) by Marc Scott Zicree (Silman-James, 2018)

George Clayton Johnson: Twilight Zone Scripts and Stories (1996, Streamline Pictures Press)

Richard De Roy interview with Stephen W. Bowie (2007); classictvhistory.com

Internet Movie Database

Internet Speculative Fiction Database

Wikipedia


Notes:

__Ed Wynn also appeared in the season one episode “One for the Angels.” Before this he appeared in Serling’s Playhouse 90 drama “Requiem for a Heavyweight.”

__William Sargent also appeared in the season four episode “The Parallel.”

__Dick Wilson also appeared in the season one episode “Escape Clause.”

__Chuck Hicks also appeared in the earlier season five episode "Steel."

__George Clayton Johnson wrote a total of eight episodes of the show:

                __ “Execution” (story by)

                __ “The Four of Us are Dying” (story by)

                __ “A Penny for Your Thoughts” (original teleplay)

                __ “The Prime Mover” (story by)

                __ “A Game of Pool” (original teleplay)

                __ “Nothing in the Dark” (original teleplay)

                __ “Kick the Can” (original teleplay)

                __ “Ninety Years Without Slumbering” (story by)

__Johnson also co-wrote an adaptation of his script “Kick the Can” with Richard Matheson and Melissa Mathison for a segment of Twilight Zone: the Movie (1983). His episode “A Game of Pool” was adapted for an episode of the 1980s revival of The Twilight Zone during its third season. The adaptation uses Johnson’s original ending not featured in the original series episode.

__The story treatment for "Ninety Years Without Slumbering" was first published in George Clayton Johnson: Twilight Zone Scripts and Stories (1996, Streamline Pictures Press). His original script, "The Grandfather Clock," was first published in The Bleeding Edge: Dark Barriers, Dark Frontiers edited by Jason V. Brock and William F. Nolan (2009, Cicatrix Press).

__In addition to writing the original season one opening theme, Bernard Hermann composed original scores for seven episodes of the show:

            __"Where is Everybody"

            __"Walking Distance"

            __"The Lonely"

            __"Eye of the Beholder"

            __"Little Girl Lost"

            __"Living Doll"

            __"Ninety Years Without Slumbering"

__"Ninety Years Without Slumbering" was adapted into a Twilight Zone Radio Drama by author Dennis Etchison, starring Bill Erwin (2010, Falcon Picture Group)


Henry Clay Work's "Grandfather's Clock." First published in 1876:


My grandfather's clock was too large for the shelf,
So it stood ninety years on the floor;
It was taller by half than the old man himself,
Though it weighed not a pennyweight more.
It was bought on the morn of the day that he was born,
And was always his treasure and pride;
But it stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


Ninety years without slumbering
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
His life seconds numbering,
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
It stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


In watching its pendulum swing to and fro,
Many hours had he spent while a boy.
And in childhood and manhood the clock seemed to know
And to share both his grief and his joy.
For it struck twenty-four when he entered at the door,
With a blooming and beautiful bride;
But it stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


Ninety years without slumbering
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
His life seconds numbering,
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
It stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


My grandfather said that of those he could hire,
Not a servant so faithful he found;
For it wasted no time, and had but one desire —
At the close of each week to be wound.
And it kept in its place — not a frown upon its face,
And its hands never hung by its side.
But it stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


Ninety years without slumbering
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
His life seconds numbering,
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
It stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


It rang an alarm in the dead of the night —
An alarm that for years had been dumb;
And we knew that his spirit was pluming for flight —
That his hour of departure had come.
Still the clock kept the time, with a soft and muffled chime,
As we silently stood by his side;
But it stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


Ninety years without slumbering
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
His life seconds numbering,
(tick, tick, tick, tick),
It stopp'd short — never to go again —
When the old man died.


George Clayton Johnson
(1929 - 2015)


Brian